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I didn't read this novel for a while due to the fact that there are almost no new chapters, and even after that time there was almost nothing I haven't read. unnecessary things like : the rape was not necessary and it did not add anything good to the novel , the fact that he was reincarnated is kind of useless as it also does not add anything good and useful , it would be much better if he simply recalls the memories of a past life . this reincarnation thing with memories is often used to nerfy the protagonist and make him have a beta mentality. the progress of the protagonist with "women" seems very slow and meaningless as the author could have ended these provocations and continued the story, Natalia's situation is very strange, it seems that in the beginning the author would do something with this character and then it changed and then it kind of disappeared and then it came back. anyway , the last few chapters were kind of hard to read , with the protagonist 's intelligence level going down either from letting the guy who was a rapist go away only to have to deal with it again and the fact that Natalia thinks the protagonist must act with the "level" of morality she thinks is right. it would be nice to vary a protagonist who doesn't act submissive and speaks straight away that owes no explanation.
A Lewd Story
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yes I understand that you are new and still learning, but think about the following situation, do you really think that the moral values here on earth are the same as those on other planets? even if it's the same race it doesn't make sense, because the situation they live in is totally different from ours, their story is also different, so how can it be the same? calling the mc beta is because the mc can seduce women without doing anything just for the pheromones, but still act like a child, the only thing i expect from the mc who spent so much time in the forest surviving is that he act mature .
Draky_Vampire:sorry, you had a bad experience with the novel. I am just a beginner, and I still don't know how to write it properly... There was no planning, and I wrote as I explored the story... So those things happened (Natalia thing)... While the story is a slice of life one, so I still don't understand what wrong the mc did... Idk how beta he is? But well, what can you expect from someone like me? I can only blame my incompetence...
sorry, you had a bad experience with the novel. I am just a beginner, and I still don't know how to write it properly... There was no planning, and I wrote as I explored the story... So those things happened (Natalia thing)... While the story is a slice of life one, so I still don't understand what wrong the mc did... Idk how beta he is? But well, what can you expect from someone like me? I can only blame my incompetence...
I can't imagine it! How would someone become mature after their desires are toned down to just survival? They say, if someone remains in a forest for a long time, without any company, he will go insane! That's why I didn't make him mature... While the morals can be different, you can't deny that whatever an era may be, one won't be indifferent to death! People will frown upon it! Because it will concern their survival! Without this, a society won't sustain! I have researched this before writing! There morals will be different, but there will be similarities no matter the era, race, place, etc. Basic instincts remains the same!
DeadSoil:yes I understand that you are new and still learning, but think about the following situation, do you really think that the moral values here on earth are the same as those on other planets? even if it's the same race it doesn't make sense, because the situation they live in is totally different from ours, their story is also different, so how can it be the same? calling the mc beta is because the mc can seduce women without doing anything just for the pheromones, but still act like a child, the only thing i expect from the mc who spent so much time in the forest surviving is that he act mature .