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Pickachu123
Pickachu123Lv13yr
2021-06-17 14:50

Keep it up author 😁. Ah, Hope Park could have stayed in Country A longer. Is Chase mother really dead or she got isekai? Anyway Charles really is too naive for Chase, somebody get this boy out of that dam closet.

Hacker Z (BL)

Chase_Xavier_123
4.8
21 Chs

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beautyjiu
beautyjiuLv1

Its xiaojiu! WN keeps deleting my pther reviews so I made a new account TwT This story is full of suprises and the MC is very likable. The writing is neither fast paced or slow but jusg right! If you want a witty and charming MC, Chase is the one for you! I love this ^^ He’s such a smart baby

3yr

Carolina_Da_Dilva
Carolina_Da_DilvaLv4

Estou gostando cada vez mais da história. Espero ansiosamente por mais capítulos e muito obrigado. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

This story is quite intriguing. 😌 Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 17 release. Writing Quality. The narratives were easy to read and understand. Though, there are a few g-mistakes it improves as the story progressed in the latest chapters. (I also put up some suggestions, hope that helps. Oh, and another thing check out your tenses, sometimes you kept reverting from past then present tenses in some paragraphs, I could mention some if you wanted.) Stability of Updates. I won't comment on this. Just take your time honing each of your chapters. Quality > Quantity. Story Development. So far I enjoyed the development so far with a lot of surprising twists put by the author. I love how the story moves forward with Charles trying to catch Z, then Z trying to go on with his mission (well, I won't spoil much other than this 😌). For the romance between the leads, I've still not seen not much yet so far but it's alright, since the author were able to build up a lot of "wanting" for the readers for the two to finally meet up rather than a few chance encounters. Each chapter, I really look forward for them to finally meet up longer 🤭 Character Design. The main characters are all well crafted and they distinguish very well to each other. Even the supporting ones, you will emphathy and laugh with them, I enjoyed Kira's personality lol. World Background. Well detailed. Overall, this book is really has a potential for its genre. I hope it will turn better especially with the romance of the two leads and not become some other bl's out there with rushed development. This book is greatly recommended, if you love to read a story with a real development that the author really put thoughts on writing, then this story is for you. This is why it gets 5/5 to me because of the development so far. 🥰 Keep it up, author! This will stay in my colls and look out for more updates 🙏😌🥰.

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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Author

I know I am shameless for writing review like this 🙄. It's story about a 18 year old musician who is a hacker with code name Z. Unlike other criminals he doesn't have that complex where he thinks what he is doing is absolutely right, he knows his flaws but what he knows about his bad side is just the peak of the iceberg. On the other hand we have the main male lead who is working on Z's case for like three to two years. Despite these circumstances both of found each other getting attracted.

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d_nmalory
d_nmaloryLv2

From the beginning of the story, I could tell just how much the author felt about his characters and how much they mean to the same. As a sentimental person, I value how an author portrays his or her characters more than anything. For Z and Charles, well fdon author 💜

3yr
mskim133
mskim133Lv1

This is great!!! And that's not just because I like hackers😝. The story is awesome and I am loving the mc Chase: the author's description of him is lit! On top of that, he's also very smart. Ain't nobody's gonna catch him yet, Kudos to the author on a great work!

3yr
26stars
26starsLv12

This book is good and worth reading. I can feel the tense atmosphere right from the start. The storyline is interesting and shows the author's hard work. The pace is too fast in some parts, but it's still acceptable. I found some minor errors like the lack of commas in some sentences, and I suggest the author proofread again to make this story more amazing than it is right now. I'd personally recommend Grammarly to help correct the minor errors. I also use it because my writings are a mess, lol. Overall, this is a good story and I will look forward to more chapters! 🥰[img=recommend]

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Jeniffer_Bl007
Jeniffer_Bl007Lv1

The Mc is named Chase (maybe not be real) he is a musician a pop artist but he has other identity which is hacker Z the best hacker of hacker forum near country T ( his background is kind of shady I think). The only person who was successful to get near catching him was criminal psychologist Charles Zimin. But you know Mr. Charles resignated for some reason three years ago. Now, Z is in his home country but he is not the psychologist Charles anymore but Ceo Charles. Charles knows too much about Z. I don't think even if they get in a relationship it will be romantic, pratical at most. Not to mention Chase is said to be obsessive towards his late mother and in current chapter he didn't care about that White guy. He doesn't go out to much if it's not necessary the party always the one to start the conversation (Park), he contacts people only if it's to his benifit. When he first meet people he is always thinking what's the right way to react to the situation(Sarah, JJ). I also think he doesn't like kids but he can't do anything about them. Isn't the kind of behaviour a psychopath? May be I am reading in it to much.

3yr
Primate
PrimateLv4

Overall - This is a captivating novel to read. If you want to read a book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - Classic third person point of view. The readers are able to experience the feelings and actions of the character's, especially the MC. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. It follows the tale of Chase, a musician and also an hacker and his chronicles with Charles. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. Hard to put down. Believe me. It's captivating. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially the MC. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy romance genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done. 4h

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