the story is good and characters are well described. but you need to improve the synopsis man. if I sugarcoat it, then you could do better synopsis but without sugarcoating, the synopsis is plain trash. I can't really feel any attraction to it. you have to let me know a brief description what I can expect from the story. please change the synopsis. this story is good but it might go unnoticed because of the synopsis.
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