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2022-02-13 01:15

have read till chap 113(current latest) and this is my opinion. its a well-thought story. the characters are great. and when i say great i mean annoyingly real. well wht i mean is that altho there are some annoying characters. they dont feel like a 2d char. so altho i hate them, i appreciate those characters. the world however are a bit weird. its a western fantasy but the people are eastern and the term sect or ancestors do exists. so its a bit weird but not exactly in a bad way. the world building is slow, we barely know a lot abt the world. i mean there are some bits of info that does indicates the depth of the history. but as of now, none have been revealed. which is why 3 stars for now. my biggest and only problem is the MC as he is a hotheaded type. like seriously, he would do something reckles on a whim. and not only that, he is quite ruthless and cold and also evil in a way. which honestly was already warn by the author, but i didnt read it. so thats just my fault. but nevertheless, MC is just annoying to me. he acts like a tyrant, offending people for the smallest reason. its like yeah, you will be ruthless if someone pass your bottomline. but the prob is, your bottomline is wayyy too high. perhaps the best way to describe him is that he is acts like a noble. he is arrogant and hot blooded. fearless towards anyone. if you offend me by the slightest, ill kill you or extort you. as you can see, i really dislike MC. but in the end i kept reading. bcs i feel like the book has potential and as of now, the characters still feels real and well design. so yeah, idk how long i can persist. perhaps another 100 chap unless the MC changes his personality. so overall, the story are great. plothole do exist here and there, but most of them doesnt really change the core of the story. so we can let that slide. thus, my only advice w you is to prepare yourself w the MC's personality, bcs if you are like me. who likes the complete opposite of this MC. well, you can expect to frown in annoyance every 5 chapter or so. other than tht, the story is great and should be given a try.

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whoops did i use hot blooded? forgive me, it was supposed to be hot headed. MC is by no means lustful. he acts normal but wont jump to any beauty tht he sees.

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