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CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor3yr
2021-09-28 15:48

Yo peeps. Shameless author that isn't shameless, supporting his own work. This is a system novel that will be updated daily as you read and support it. An action weak to strong concept, in a little twilight twist. Yeah and that's all I will reveal for now, if you want to know more then Read....

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GOD_KING_AQUA
GOD_KING_AQUALv15

Question in the Synopsis he is unmatched against his peers so does that mean he’s op and if so shouldn’t the tags be strong to stronger ? Or op to more op ig

CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

The author here: The Webnovel new updated tag, wouldn't permit such but I will see what I can do.

GOD_KING_AQUA:Question in the Synopsis he is unmatched against his peers so does that mean he’s op and if so shouldn’t the tags be strong to stronger ? Or op to more op ig
GOD_KING_AQUA
GOD_KING_AQUALv15

Ok i see,also is what i said correct in meaning mc is op? Or is This actually weak to strong Ya know ?

CollinX_BrainZ:The author here: The Webnovel new updated tag, wouldn't permit such but I will see what I can do.
CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

The author here: Actually it kinda of like the both, from weak to strong and then OP

GOD_KING_AQUA:Ok i see,also is what i said correct in meaning mc is op? Or is This actually weak to strong Ya know ?
GOD_KING_AQUA
GOD_KING_AQUALv15

Ok,also thx for clarifying

CollinX_BrainZ:The author here: Actually it kinda of like the both, from weak to strong and then OP
Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv15

It’s a good story as long as he doesn’t over rely on his system. (Y'know we all want a mc that has some talent and not like all the other novels that give a system to a mc who then gets a body that’s talentless and must work his way up...)<—That’s the usual cliche nowdays

CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

Thanks, am still learning so I appreciate your comment.🙌

Ghost_Playing:It’s a good story as long as he doesn’t over rely on his system. (Y'know we all want a mc that has some talent and not like all the other novels that give a system to a mc who then gets a body that’s talentless and must work his way up...)<—That’s the usual cliche nowdays
zEr0f
zEr0fLv13

There’s a romance tag?? Just don’t Tell me it’s harem

CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

No harem

zEr0f:There’s a romance tag?? Just don’t Tell me it’s harem
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Rexburn12
Rexburn12Lv14

Which Universe is the story set in? The Originals?.

Akashic_recorder
Akashic_recorderLv1

Question here did you get some inspiration from supreme magus?

Tunic01
Tunic01Lv15

you just got a new reader👍

CollinX_BrainZ:No harem
leo_valdez_4588
leo_valdez_4588Lv1

hey author I wanna ask does his sister dies from poison....(spoiler pls)i haven't able to read further than 50 ch because I don't want his sister to die pls

CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

Well, I could give you a spoiler, however, it might ruin the fun for others. So there are two options first, is to join my server where I could freely give you the spoiler, or option two, buy the novel a super gift. Am sure you will make the best decision😉, also thanks for reading 🙌

leo_valdez_4588:hey author I wanna ask does his sister dies from poison....(spoiler pls)i haven't able to read further than 50 ch because I don't want his sister to die pls
Lakshmi_Sandeep
Lakshmi_SandeepLv3

😂😂😂

Jagabani
JagabaniLv2

Author una take advantage of poor reader🥹😂

CollinX_BrainZ:Well, I could give you a spoiler, however, it might ruin the fun for others. So there are two options first, is to join my server where I could freely give you the spoiler, or option two, buy the novel a super gift. Am sure you will make the best decision😉, also thanks for reading 🙌
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CollinX_BrainZ
CollinX_BrainZAuthor

🤣🤣🤣

Jagabani:Author una take advantage of poor reader🥹😂
Cameron90000
Cameron90000Lv4

Shameless author stealing stories

Its_weezy
Its_weezyLv13

Does the main character look like a demon he’s a demons son so he got to look like a demon at least horns I love demon main characters and when they look like a demonic

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Unholy_Bird
Unholy_BirdLv13
Nabuco
NabucoLv3
Grifdacier
GrifdacierLv4

Alright, i droped this at chapter 22, why you can ask ? (some spoiler ahead ) Well it's simple and i think i'm not the only one who droped the story before it even really begin : The author made the mc too dumb (probably to make more chacarter developement later) , he doesn't make any rationals choices and is surprised over logical things everybody know. Let me explain : The mc get reincarnated in another world, (so far so good) but he is born as an half demon, then he get a system. The system force him to become a full fledged demon and he is now full of distrust toward the system. For this he decided... to stop drinking milk ?!? And then he is surprised that he will die in 8 days if he don't get sustainance ? Were you a human in your previous life (he was) or what ? And then just after that (really it should be in the same or next chap) he decide to explore the system and use a technique with the not at all ominous name "Demon might mystic technic" or something like that... And that just one example Bruh Another thing : the complete lack of imagination toward names, father = christopher, mother = chrystie... Still this story has some good points : the grammar, a big number of chapters, and an author who still read the comments of it's firsts chapters. If you can ignore the stupidity of the mc in the intial chapters, this should be your fit if you like demons and stuff (there is only so much i can take) But here is my honest advice to the author that i think could improve the story : First and foremost, rewrite the mc in the first chapters, this story has a lot of potential (just look at the comments) but the mc being dumb cost it too much. In the first twenty chaps, i saw the comments dwindle as i read. I dont know if the author has stats to see how many people read his story but i'm sure 50% of his inital readers (first chap) didnt pass the 20 chapters. Second, make more exotic name or least that don't sound the same (if you don't have any idea, use a generator on internet or just ask your community) And third, more descriptions : what i mean by that for example is the mc second pair of eyes : he get them when he become a full demon but where are they ? On his forehead, temples, cheeks ? Also are they pitch black like his normal eyes ? We don't get anymore info other that he growed a pair of eyes. That's all for me, thanks for the story

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