Review Detail of geewintG in I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.

The opening first chapter might have delved in too deep into philosophy and was too long since some readers would just look at the first paragraph and decide whether it was worth it or not. However, it was followed by a comedic line that would have explained why which is good. Understandably, it is part of the narrative but there are ways to shorten this and still grab the readers attention. With the following chapter, I like how they utilize the surroundings as to reveal a bits of their past with upfront saying it to the readers. Which is the stoplight scene. Now that is creative. There are some parts in writing, however, that sounded unnatural because of the overly used simile. Moving on from these things, overall the writing is spectacular and neat. The author did a good job. Keep up the good performance.