For me it's a first, it's the first time I found a story with absolutely 0 punctuation, sometimes there's a capital letter, like 1 or 2 per chapters. I didn't even try to read it to see if the story was good, mediocre or bad, the absence of punctuation put this story directly in the lowest rating possible. When I say 0 punctuation it's reaaly 0 punctuation, I checked several chapters and there's not a single dot or comma, it's absolutely unreadable...

Very bad grammar and sadly nothing new, same plot with hundreds other got novels out there! .. .. . . ....................................

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the novel is very good nice start nice system and nice background build all in all it's awesome and I hope this doesn't drop it's really good

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