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2021-07-08 04:41

pretty solid, there's room for improvement but its pretty nice, there may be a little plot holes but even the original had plot holes so its not that big of a deal, the only thing Im looking to forward to him you do the 3000 year timeskip and how itl include the wives besides Elizabeth

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