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The plot line is good but the book needs some editing. You tend to use a lot of '...' in between sentences making it hard to read. It disturbs the flow of reading. You also need to pay attention to the beginning of a conversation. Maybe reading a lot of other books would help you get the idea. Good luck, Author!

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My Love Is True

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thank you for honest comment..