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It's not that good, unfortunately. The idea is good but the implementation failed. It jumps from event to event it hardly feels like Marvel as there is hardly any interaction. He talks about being a hero and preventing the Avengers from becoming like Earth 616, but completely skips over everything. Now in DC and Ben 10 and you get as a small between note that he has taken care of almost all the problem e.g. Magneto. Or that he is in doubt whether the people deserve rescue etc.. But you have not seen any hero action except for the beginning. My tip to you is: Make a proper concept for the story with a constant story line and don't skip from event to event.

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