Review Detail of Big_Nigg4 in In Marvel as Superman

i hope you dont put this the wrong way man, but i really do hope this novel gets re-written. first, at the description , he got a new chance at marvel then suddenly seeing dc getting mixed in the story the idea is great actually, but if you mix both franchise and all other universe, it will mess up the story. read upto chap 7. and it feels like.. things are all over the place bro.. one moment he flew from there to there then another moment robots created then another moment a base in jupiter then teleportation device.. come on man.. how long did he do those things? i know as well that this is a fiction and everything.. anyway goodluck brudda,