Review Detail of Huntsman in In Marvel as Superman

This is on another level of edge. I'll explain in a second, but first. Writing quality: It's not as bad as some other fics that can be found on this site, but the dialogues and everything feel bare. It's like reading an unfinished script. Updating stability: Pretty consistent, few fics can reach over 100 chapters, and each chapter is decently long for this site. Character design: Never liked the whole blue, red and outside underwear Superman has, I like this. World background & Plot: Ohhh dear. This is, it's just bad. It's like seeing a twelve years old kid trying to write something gritty and edgy, and watching as he fails spectacularly. Mentions of r@pe, pedophiles are plenty, but it's made cheap by the reveal, feels incredibly insincere. It's what me of 7 years ago would have written. Overall: I give this a 2.4, it would have been lower, but I feel like the author is trying, but his story is lacking direction