Review Detail of Coldman in In MHA With Tremor Tremor Devil Fruit Power
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Such an amazing concept, but the execution was horribel. The power of the Gura Gura No Mi is amazing, Haki is also cool, but surpassing All Might in a few months is stupid, the body training arc after the UA exam is shit and beyond stupid. Can a good author please take this concept and make a good story?
In MHA With Tremor Tremor Devil Fruit Power
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Ahh, This again. Well, OK, maybe I'll fix it a bit. However, for him to be able to defeat All Might in 1 month of training? Well, 1 month was due to overtraining. That is, the MC's practice goes beyond the limits. Until one month, exactly the last day of the MC's practice, the MC was able to break his limiter. This is like the case with Saitama. However, the MC here is a little different. If I make the MC exceed the limit as extreme as Saitama, then this story is no longer fun. Basically, I take Logic or get inspired by the story from One Punch Man
That’s good to hear. It’s rare finding authors that respects the readers opinions and even acting on them. I hope you can change the story for the better and keep improving your skills. Wish you all the best :)
KING_ZEN:So that's the part I want to change. Subconsciously, I wrote Ryu has unlimited money. I'm so stupid wkwkwkwk. by the way, thanks for the advice, homie. and maybe for MC purposes, well we'll see in the future. if I say now what the MC's aim is, then I'm revealing Spoiler