It's a good read, although I would prefer some more context on how the magic worked. The protag is cunning and smart and makes use of his knowledge from the future. I wish we could find out more about the protag himself from before he became Samuel and the things he did. It might help make this image of a smart and cunning Samuel more concrete. Other than those, I love the dialogue and the interaction between the characters. It's also nice to seem some bits of action at the start of the story!
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