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DerangedPirate
DerangedPirateLv52yrDerangedPirate

Read up to chapter 16. The story is allright, nothing really stands out to me compared to similar stories. Would be a decent read for me to pass some time if it wasn't for the censoring of swear words. The near constant "*Bleep*" "*Bloop*" is jarring to read and immersion breaking. Have swearing in your story or don't, I don't care either way. If you choose to do so however, then just go all the way without the ridiculous censoring.

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Stacking My Abilities

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SmallFries
SmallFriesAuthorSmallFries

OKAY. That's it! I've had enough of this. I'm fixing the *Bleep*s... Thank you for your feedback

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

Kinda ironic that the gif u posted has a censored swear word >.>