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Gobble
GobbleLv132yr
2023-01-11 06:59

It's a Great book. Honestly, has the potential to be top 100. If only you didn't put the paywall so soon, I'm sure more people would have picked it up. I was lucky that this book was offered to me for free for 24 hours, so I made it deep enough to actually be absorbed in the story. You should've leave the first 20 chapters to be free so reader can really get a taste of how it's going to be. Not to mention, you picked a very unique genre. Anyway on to the actual review,. I give you huge props on Story Development and Character Development. Granted when it comes to wrestling, I do enjoy the actual match itself rather than the buildup, so it's fun to see it from a different perspective. Your character development in Brent, Rob and Dacey is awesome, especially in the later chapter. And what I love the most is how 'weak' Rob is. He is a proper underdog that actually rising without a cheat but sheer hard work. Unconsciously, you made interesting conflicts that normally would've been pushed aside in this type of novels. Now is there a flaw? Maybe a bit slow. But in all fairness at Rob's current position, I do understand the extreme details Also good couple btw👍

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kirupakaran
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Shameless author review :) Do read and enjoy this slice of life story. I promise that this story will bring you both joy and heartbreak. Also, let me know how you feel about the story. I am open to suggestions as well.

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CaptainBoyHole
CaptainBoyHoleLv13

I shouldn't need to pay to read at 11 chapters. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

2yr
Devansh_Saini
Devansh_SainiLv2

hey author where are you bruh its been a week i didn't see any updates are tou okay

2yr
Cathulhu
CathulhuLv13

I want to read your story but you just locked your story in just ten chapters, come on man that is not enough to review your story for me...

2yr
ashbash988
ashbash988Lv15

love to read it but not spending 21 coins to read one page

2yr
Rin_Nurnia
Rin_NurniaLv4

Wow! Reincarnation+Modern day. To be honest, this is my first time reading sports genre so I'm curious to see how the plot is going to work. Looking forward for the rest of the chapters👍🏻

2yr
Monarch_Ash
Monarch_AshLv4

frankly , it's a really good novel and it's obvious that the author definitely has some knowledge and an interest in wrestling. the way the mc is portrayed is very realistic and I like how everything didn't just fall into his lap. The novel is definitely one of my favorites

2yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

The 10 chapters are boring. The chapters are a never-ending internal monologue and a dumping ground for unnecessary information. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr
shootingstar27
shootingstar27Lv1

One thing that I like about this novel is, Is how you deliver what the MC doing, and thinking and also how you deliver it as a narrator. every chapter is long and it's a good thing also every title of your chapters literally would make the readers curious and excited to read more of it. to be honest it is my first time reading about a transmigration novel about modern sports. it feels unique and new to me.

2yr
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