Review Detail of Bogdan7 in Omnipotent Destroyer
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This is simply a bad story.... there are a lot of things that the author does poorly... like after more than 40 chapters we know almost nothing about the world.... that would be ok if he focused on the characters and their relationship... but even that is bad....the start is way to rushed, by the way he wrote it, if i was the mc, i would feel confused more than anything else (even as a reader i feel confused...and not in a good way, like a good story would make you)... hate?? yes, but not that much ... But the thing that iritated me the most was how the author keps on inserting himself in the story... at some point every second chapter is about the writer...
Omnipotent Destroyer
Elixer_Yuu
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Not to be Rude but i thino you then need To make it a new paragraph to help the Readers, its geTtjg too comfusImg and you need to foesh out everuthoNg
Elixer_Yuu:Ok. Everything you said is all correct. I am still editing the story, and, perhaps, in the future, the story might change completely. But there is just one issue with what you said. If you think that I keep inserting myself in the story, then I want to say that the 'me' in the story is also a character that will be in full action from chapter 49. Please kindly read up to chapter 49 to know 'my' role. (And I am technically the God of the world, so I don't see anything wrong with that lol)
Ok. Everything you said is all correct. I am still editing the story, and, perhaps, in the future, the story might change completely. But there is just one issue with what you said. If you think that I keep inserting myself in the story, then I want to say that the 'me' in the story is also a character that will be in full action from chapter 49. Please kindly read up to chapter 49 to know 'my' role. (And I am technically the God of the world, so I don't see anything wrong with that lol)
DaoistDX2IIc:Not to be Rude but i thino you then need To make it a new paragraph to help the Readers, its geTtjg too comfusImg and you need to foesh out everuthoNg