Review Detail of laotzu999 in Omnipotent Destroyer
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i dont like it , the mc is just fool and i only read to volume 1 , i think u exaggerate things too much . the thing which should finish in 1 chaper u take it till 2-3 chapters . and u didn't even tell about world , power levels he is just killing the enemies we dont even know how strong they are .I was hoping for an evil mc but his thoughts r really childish thinking ABOUT his previous parents . this just not my cup of tea đ”. ( sry 4 bag English )
Omnipotent Destroyer
Elixer_Yuu
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Elixer_Yuu:thnx for the honest review. I know that the first few chapters are trash. but I believe it will improve as the story continues (I know I m shameless), so plz, keep reading
You should check 'Terrible writing advice' channel, it help give tips and idea of how 'not' to write certain topic there (in a short but funny/sarcastic advice with animation example), remember to check the video description link in the older video since he do made 'honest thought' version that give more tips (more actual helpful tips there, but still recommend watch the video first then the post on his site)
Elixer_Yuu:thnx for the honest review. I know that the first few chapters are trash. but I believe it will improve as the story continues (I know I m shameless), so plz, keep reading
ArashiTenebris:You should check 'Terrible writing advice' channel, it help give tips and idea of how 'not' to write certain topic there (in a short but funny/sarcastic advice with animation example), remember to check the video description link in the older video since he do made 'honest thought' version that give more tips (more actual helpful tips there, but still recommend watch the video first then the post on his site)
yea sorry, but the truth's truth. the first chapters were not so special but I m trying my best to edit the chapters and improve them
Author_x_Author:pls dont call ur stuff trash, bad maybe but not trash and just try to improve
Elixer_Yuu:yea sorry, but the truth's truth. the first chapters were not so special but I m trying my best to edit the chapters and improve them