It was good until you started trying to make him a "good" person when I was looking for a mc the destroys everything and then I tried to push on but...it was to much when you dropped a baby on the 10 year old mc's lap forcing him to take care of it...which he does(because it looks like his sisters)...
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LIKEcan you spoil a little bit. Bcuz if you don't tell a little bit, it destroyed expectations of the readers if you do make him a good person. I sometimes experienced that, some author change their Mc slowly to be a good man which is dumb move when you title your novel an Evil or destroy something or his personality is evil etc.. I drop so many novels bcuz of that. It's better to read some heroic mc or edgy mc rather than deceiver author's novel
ok so his parents and his loves ones will die as I will kill and he will destroy the whole continent and will move on to the other continents with destruction following him. you want more?