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2021-09-03 03:01

If I'm honest the idea is pretty good, ms the plot is just really messy, combine that with the grammar being not that great (but still a lot better then mtl) and around chapter 10 I have zero clue what is happening, perhaps if I were to reread it I could puzzle it out but it's just written in a rather confusing way. For example it says he finally got back the memories he lost in a chapter, however it was never mentioned that he lost his memories?

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