Review Detail of UndeadProgenitor in I am Volibear in monsterverse

Iam in the most recent chapter (6) and i think it’s enough to give a review. So far its Going alright but the author will need an editor. There were minor grammatical errors. A little bit of description would also be great. The author didnt really describe things in great detail. Details help the imagination. Other than that everything is good. It’s the most recent titan ff ive seen and i hope it doesn’t get dropped.