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Casimir2799
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Hey guys I'm the one writing this novel . I'm requesting for some time stone or power stones I'm trying to bring more chapters but no one is leaving any review or showing any interest .

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Mortal becomes a deity Fanfic.

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ForgottenHope
ForgottenHopeLv4ForgottenHope

Well once I started reading this and I saw the chapters, It was very discouraging. The chapters are so short, it feels like am reading a paragraph for each one.

Boobaslurper
BoobaslurperLv4Boobaslurper

i read the 1st chapter and its only contain a short paragraph. 2nd chapter is the same, a short paragraph. jumping to the latest, 38th, and its a wall of text. sigh... 🤦🏻‍♂️

Tussi_333
Tussi_333Lv2Tussi_333

I really like the story I hope you continue it soon 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

SCP3812
SCP3812Lv3SCP3812

the problem is with the chapters, they aren't chapters but paragraphs so when people start reading they get quickly discouraged by the paragraphs for chapters and then instantly stop, so unless you compile the paragraphs i don't think people will really show any interest in this.