Review Detail of Boltz_Theone in Dragonball: The Primitive Human

Am not someone that gives perfect reviews but this should be perfect enough. Anyway let's talk about this fic shall we?. It has it flaws as I know most of the other readers know. The Grammer and use of words is quite decent but it needs heavy work that am sure the author can work on. The plot right now doesn't have much... how can I say this... 'Impact' so to say. I can also see that the author is not going for the op from the start as and actually wants the mc to be strong but not overly so. And with what am seeing as of now I hope new and interesting antagonists appear and not make the story boring... -From your one and only Boltzthe one.