Review Detail of Alima_Mahazabin in Ninety-nine desert nights

Item: Ninety-nine desert nights
Rating: 5

Review detail

Alima_MahazabinLv12yrAlima_Mahazabin

It's definitely an interesting story, though I wish we knew a bit more about the characters. The prose is nice though a little bit confusing and some imagery could have also been added to draw the reader in more.

Ninety-nine desert nights

Marikit

Liked it!

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MarikitAuthorMarikit

I appreciate your comment, it will be best if you can comment on which chapter shall I improve. Rest assured that you will know about the characters as the story progress.[img=recommend]

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