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Hey guys, Author here. I hope my review doesn’t seem biased. I honestly don’t think this book was a 5 star...yet. I feel like I’m improving while I progress, and I hope that you guys will agree. I started this book kind of on a whim, but seeing the reception has inspired me to try pretty hard on it. I’ll try and put more and more effort as the chapters progress. If you guys like my book or have any suggestions, please leave a comment or make a review. Thank you for paying attention to my book.

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One thing I was wondering was the fact that although the system doesn’t appear much in the book but you are able to pull it off is amazing all on it’s own, but what are you going to do about explaining how much, lets 10 points in strength is? Would you be able to pull a tree out of the ground and throw it Or Would you be able to brake a branch off a tree and throw it Clarification may be able to help me and mabye some other readers become more invested to the system side of the book

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5 is around base human strength, so think of 50 as 10 humans. The stats are a lil wonky though and I’m thinking of redoing them. Loneliness System will be back to updating sometime next week

Inferiority:One thing I was wondering was the fact that although the system doesn’t appear much in the book but you are able to pull it off is amazing all on it’s own, but what are you going to do about explaining how much, lets 10 points in strength is? Would you be able to pull a tree out of the ground and throw it Or Would you be able to brake a branch off a tree and throw it Clarification may be able to help me and mabye some other readers become more invested to the system side of the book
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Thank you very much for the response.

navigator_:5 is around base human strength, so think of 50 as 10 humans. The stats are a lil wonky though and I’m thinking of redoing them. Loneliness System will be back to updating sometime next week