author why did you make the mc op even though he's only 5 y.o I get it he's not op it's just hes so op as a 5 y.o child.just make he's character grow or something it's just a bit unbelievable how op he's gotten in just 20 chaps(im in the early chaps so spoil me of any character development)it's just a friendly critique so keep up the great work
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