Review Detail of Darwin111111 in MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World
Review detail
Writing quality: ⭐⭐⭐. It's not so good. Stability of updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐. From what I checked, it's fine. 30 chapters are separated almost by days. Development of the story: ⭐⭐. Strange, problems are supposed to look for him, but, like any story that does not know how to continue, the protagonist looks for them. I mean, it is said that he is not going to be a hero, but that problems will seek him, but I have only seen how he stupidly launches himself to do something. I mean, I know he's fine, but he's even planning to save a girl from the Japanese mafia ... I guess alone. That is not continuing your normal life, it is exactly the opposite of what is proposed in the synopsis ... it is looking for problems. Character design: ⭐. Lol, I had described great things about the character before, but hey, let me elaborate. Not with the protagonist, since his personality depends on the author's state of mind. Basically, it is a fanfic that the protagonist is said to see as if it were real life, but puppy eyes appear, and other things, but that is not personality. What I mean is that he acts corresponding to those unreal expressions, and the protagonist and the others act like the most generic and cliché anime characters. I mean, it's not that shallow when two close characters speak ... but add a third and it gets damaged. World Background: ⭐⭐. So far the only new thing I've seen is the Gyms and the protagonist's noodle stand as original. There is nothing else that was not created by anime creator yet. It surely increases, but I left it at chapter 13 and have no intention of rereading it, so I'm sorry. In short, all a great wasted potential. It is my honest opinion. You can give your opinion, but save me any comments that are not arguing with me or against me; No rat-kid comments and hateful talk for no reason. We are different, you like something and I don't, or it may simply be that my expectation is higher than a newbie like the one who makes that kind of comment.
MHA: 'Serene' Life in Another World
Gonshido
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Gonshido:Thanks Darwin for the great review. I have read this review multiple times and I am still re-reading it. I will try to improve, as you have pointed out my mistakes. This is my first time writing anything, so I am very bad at writing (as you can see), but I will try and again thank you.
I dropped it from the start, when instead of killing Muscle with a sniper rifle he decides to fight with a knife, I realized what kind of "smart" things to expect in fanfiction.
Darwin111111:No problem bro, that's normal. That is normal when you start with new ideas.
Darwin111111:No problem bro, that's normal. That is normal when you start with new ideas.
CodezL:I dropped it from the start, when instead of killing Muscle with a sniper rifle he decides to fight with a knife, I realized what kind of "smart" things to expect in fanfiction.
Gonshido:Thanks Darwin for the great review. I have read this review multiple times and I am still re-reading it. I will try to improve, as you have pointed out my mistakes. This is my first time writing anything, so I am very bad at writing (as you can see), but I will try and again thank you.
