Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in The World without You

The story feels very realistic. The author did a fine job telling the parts of the characters as well as the situation. The only thing that i'd like to point out is the "showing" technique instead of "telling". For an example, instead of saying the mother was short-tempered, I think a dialogue from her daughter, expressing how angry she was with the person or something along those lines. In the way, you could show us her personalities.