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NWOKLv42yr
2022-04-17 19:46

It was good novel you know new concept etc but it quickly become boring. Because of few things first of all there is racism in this novel(obviously). All the 'criminal origination' and 'kidnapping' is done by foreign people . You can ignore that part but you can't ignore the story development everything is happening around the MC. You would say because he is the mc! right ? No story development is not done around the MC for example A competition is arrange and mc ' chiche ' there that's normal, because mc needs to travel but if mc in two places (Yes just two in whole novel) and everything happens around him. It becomes boring.

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