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2022-02-22 16:27

I don’t know what to say…..this novel is such a disappointment, the FL have system but it’s mentioned just few times but it actually isn’t used much, just on the begging twice or 3 times and that’s it, then some pages are just filled with unrelated and unimportant informations, most of the time the novel is around her dog love life or around how Fm and ML love each other so much but there is no substance it all feels empty. I Was hoping to get better so I stuck to it till page 340 and I realised if I just skip 20 pages there is no difference, because those 20 pages is about her dog and how her family is jealous that she got married and left her home and how much they love her…..singh….. such a disappointment

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