A combination of the future world of demon slayer, as well as jujutsu kaisen. My only complaint is that Silver appears too often, so author I hope you can reduce his appearances a whole lot. Besides that, the grammar is good, fun to read and ye.
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It's only on the early chapters. But I assure you, he won't appear a lot later on that you might miss him instead and wished to make him have an appearance again lol.
so any love interest?
Phantom_Zero_v2:It's only on the early chapters. But I assure you, he won't appear a lot later on that you might miss him instead and wished to make him have an appearance again lol.
There are, but I won't tell you who.
Midnight_Rider:so any love interest?
not that I mind
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No, it's just many. Only one is accepted.
Midnight_Rider:not that I mind
oh ok
Phantom_Zero_v2:No, it's just many. Only one is accepted.
I have to disagree, the grammar is kinda poor and the story flows badly, it feels extremely rushed and I do not like that. I liked fleshed out stories with details but not too much. In this story it is like; “Mc wants to learn breathing styles but he has to go to school, then (person) wants to move in with them so now they live together and he is only 4 years older than mc but his breathing style is at master level.”
Why reply to my review then, make ur own review😂
Axes:I have to disagree, the grammar is kinda poor and the story flows badly, it feels extremely rushed and I do not like that. I liked fleshed out stories with details but not too much. In this story it is like; “Mc wants to learn breathing styles but he has to go to school, then (person) wants to move in with them so now they live together and he is only 4 years older than mc but his breathing style is at master level.”
Phantom_Zero_v2:It's only on the early chapters. But I assure you, he won't appear a lot later on that you might miss him instead and wished to make him have an appearance again lol.
