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Loxius
LoxiusLv143yr
2021-06-15 09:35

This seems a good one but, due to some messed up details regarding some of the characters especially Dragon's age, I will give it lower review. It feels like you didn't do any research before you writing this. You might say this is AU to cover it up but, it felt half-hearted. Please do some editing on the chapters to make it more refined. Of course we are not expecting much, since this is just a fanfic. But precisely because it is a fanfic that I really going forward with this review due to One Piece being my favourite manga/anime.

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I_liek_rainbowsss
I_liek_rainbowsssAuthor

I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.

Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

That's good! You can take criticism and try to change it, that's a good quality to have.

I_liek_rainbowsss:I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.
ILoveChaos
ILoveChaosLv3

Such a pain isn't it, started writing on whim and suddenly starts getting attention now have to research facts properly, I feel you pain.

I_liek_rainbowsss:I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.
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