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Loxius
LoxiusLv143yr
2021-06-15 09:35

This seems a good one but, due to some messed up details regarding some of the characters especially Dragon's age, I will give it lower review. It feels like you didn't do any research before you writing this. You might say this is AU to cover it up but, it felt half-hearted. Please do some editing on the chapters to make it more refined. Of course we are not expecting much, since this is just a fanfic. But precisely because it is a fanfic that I really going forward with this review due to One Piece being my favourite manga/anime.

Reincarnator in One Piece

I_liek_rainbowsss
4.8
27 Chs

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I_liek_rainbowsss
I_liek_rainbowsssAuthor

I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.

3yr
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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

That's good! You can take criticism and try to change it, that's a good quality to have.

I_liek_rainbowsss:I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.
3yr
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ILoveChaos
ILoveChaosLv3

Such a pain isn't it, started writing on whim and suddenly starts getting attention now have to research facts properly, I feel you pain.

I_liek_rainbowsss:I will not lie, I started writing this on a whim, and didn't do any research. Now that it got more popular, I'm gonna do more research on it and edit previous chapters.
3yr
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MichaelSingh
MichaelSinghLv3

One of best masterpiece . I have seen till now. It has alot of potential man. Keep it up and Don't Drop . It's awesome man 💯. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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I_liek_rainbowsss
I_liek_rainbowsssAuthor

As an author, I am obligated to rate my fic 5 stars. This is my first time writing a novel, so feel free to suggest changes and point out mistakes.

3yr
ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆

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NighUwu
NighUwuLv2

Nice one... Btw who's his love interest?? Or he doesn't have?? @̶͇̝̪̻̹̟̝̮̻̠̭̰̟͉̹̞͎̔͒ͬ̀̾͌͗͐ͥͨͥ͗͑͒͌̂̐́͜[̷̴̡͙͔̘̬̬̮̯ͤ̌͌̓ͪ̑̍́͘#̧̜̳͚̦̙͓̄̀̃́̌̂̔͋͆̾͠"̣͔͔̲̲̹̣̞̰̞̞͈ͯ̄ͥ̽͆ͦ̈ͭ̾ͥ̓͑̀͡͠*̶̭͔͔̣̟̯̙͚̼̪ͪ̉̽͐͗ͪ̄̓̎ͧ͊ͣ̄ͪͮ́̚͝≠̰͎̮͉̼̪̫̹̀͗̋͐͋̏ͮ̀́͡͞ͅ}̷̑͊̀̃͌̇̅̅́͛̉ͬͯͩ̅͑́́͏̪̹̥̜̥̤͚̟̖͎̠̬̮̤̜̮+̣̘͚͚̟͗̅ͬͧ́́̌̃͗̋̉͑̏́́ͅ\͕̮̙̅̆̋̋ͮ̂̔̏̃̐ͯ̃̄͛́̚͢͝͠.̢͙̣̪̖̠̮̭͚͈̜͍̖̙̙̎̌͌̊̇͗ͩ̋ͫ́ę͓̻̰̤̱̻̹̺̟̙̟̼͔̳̜́ͩ̇̔ͩͬ̽͒̊̊͜͡͝&̸̧̟͉͓͔̪̟̫͓̰̩̼̦̟̫ͯ̂͛ͣ͌̾ͦ̉͋ͪͥ̍͗̽͐͂̀͞#̵̮͚̱͍͚̟ͫ͛̍ͯͮ̃̈́͋͗͌ͩ̅̚͢͟͟ ͐̆̆ͫ͊͛ͩ҉̢͏̩̲͖̙̦̱̖͇̠ù̙̭̗̞̭͙̘͔̤̺̤̩̺̯͚̙ͦͮͧ̃͆̉ͧ̒ͯͩ̑̍̚͟ͅ€̡̈̑̉̀ͤͧ̋ͨͪͧ̈͌҉̸̮̭͕͖̻̲̜͔̜͝¤̧̹̭͖̞͎̪͓̰̲͇̠̳͍̲̫̮̒́͑̾̋ͫ͘̕ͅ£͕̮̩̲̪̜̝ͩͬ́ͯ̉͌̉͑ͮͧ͘͜ͅè̶̙͓̩͉̱̲̝͎̲̻͕̫ͩ̏ͧͨͪ̓̇̒͂̅̏ͯ̿ͧ̚͟͟͞͝%͑͋͑͑ͫͨ̄͗̋̿͂̽̇҉͕̗̝̯̻̪̻̭̜͎̹̖͈̰͈͔͘͢͡!̹͍̹̰͍̬̙̟̥̭̫͎̮̖̜ͬ͊ͬ̇ͪ͛ͤ̎ͭ́̍̔͒͐̂͐͒͠͝ͅ@̵̗̰̦̲͚͈͎̤̗ͣͦ̽̋̌͌̃̂̎́͞͞#̞̲̣̭̥̭͖̬͔̳̇͋̋ͬ͆̆̈̉̑̽͌ͨ̽̔̅̒͟͢[͗̓̓̓̆̒̆͂̿̈́ͪ͆ͧͪ҉̬̤̻̳̬̮̗̜͈͜ͅ~̶̴̢̦̳͇̮͔̩̮̺̪̼̱̺͈̖̻͉͑̔͆̏ͦ͗͌͂̎̅̀̿̕͘

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Im_too_stupid
Im_too_stupidLv1

I haven’t even read it yet but any story with the noharem tag deserves an immediate 5 star

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victor_dupretz
victor_dupretzLv1

Good more chapter please ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Rio_Bladimir
Rio_BladimirLv10

Exelente ingenuidad crecimiento miedo revelación una gran historia con un potencial muy alta espera que continúes ....................................................................................

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system
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What I like about this book is the unique concept of reincarnating and remembering all memories. Please keep up the good work and please don't drop this author sama 😊

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