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2023-07-13 07:53

just the fact that he writes his secret notes in galactic basic (star wars) is really inspirational. lolz

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I don't write a lot of review even more longish one but this story deserves it. so I will write a relatively detailed one. world building: the story has only 80s chapters but the author already has created a solid foundation for the world building without creating apparent holes nor limiting the routes for its further development. He was able already to give a solid general idea of the world without sterile info dumps. and being able to describe a world setting of a story through the simple development of the plot is impressive, even though the author sometimes cheated a bit through the use of the thoughtful nature of the MC (there are more than a few inner monologues) writing style: author has a grammar better than most other writers here. He has also improved his abilities as a narrator throughout the story. Sone initial imperfections (like the often hidden monologues and a bit of almost being excessive in MC' s complaints about children of the plain) were dealt with easily after an hidden (well not so hidden for people with "high IQ" cit. lol) plot point was partially developed, it made the general writing style fun and refreshing. Characters: Author has worked a lot on fleshing out the characters and I am not talking only about the MC, even the secondary characters (including supposed villains/enemies) are being slowly fleshed out. Same goes for the female characters both the potential lovers and the ones who will be simply close to MC. this last point is important because while there is an harem tag and I don't know how big the harme will be, I have no doubt that even harem haters could love this story because fro what I can read there won't be a collection of dolls for the MC...all the potential love interests/important female characters are being slowly developed and fleshed out and most of all they are talented so no risk of simple dolls/wall flowers following the MC. the MC itself is refreshing he is transmigrated/reincarnated as the top level of the young master of his words but surprise surprise he was never a trash and he is not an arrogant/dumb psycho without emotions or with his brain in his pants so for certain aspects it reminds while being even better than the MC of the senior brother novel. in short it is a worth novel to read no matter if you are looking to simply have fun or to find a serious reading ...the author is good and the story has an absurd overall potential and quality...I truly hope it will be a long story and Mr author can keep writing it until it's "natural ending" without dropping it or going in hiatus

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