Review Detail of yinumlia in DYL

Such a unique and amazing concept for a plot. Each character's background stories are well-written and you can clearly see their different outlooks in life. The elements of drama, fantasy and comedy combines in a very neat and entertaining manner, a good point to note. There are just some technical errors but they do not get in the way of comprehension. The narration and dialogues are also decently written. Love the characters' and story's development, I highly recommend this one. Will be looking forward to how the story will progressively further. Keep up the good work!