Review Detail of Reawakening in New acc
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The writing quality seems like a 3rd grader wrote it. Descriptive language is BORING. "The vines growing on the buildings." Like, I didn't ask. It doesn't really make the scene feel desperate, or meaningful. Grammatical mistakes EVERYWHERE. Grammarly exists! I'm using it to write this review! Edit your novel, get rid of the cringe cliches, and why did you spoil the main conflict in the synopsis? Also, why is it relevant that Japanese astronauts went to the moon? It's a bit of a coincidence that you're shoving the blame for a major pandemic onto the Japanese... coulda just said "astronaut brought back illness uwu." I'm sure the reviews that exist only exist because of review swaps, alting, or some other biased situation. Also, the names of the characters make no sense. E.G. Aya isn't a full name, it's a nickname... weeb. Also, why is a dude named CODY the sibling of a chick with the name AYA. Two different names, culturally. The world-building is p generic, still don't know how you managed to bring animal people into the world. Final note, comedy in an apocalypse scenario is cringe.
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Criticizing the story over reading just the synopsis and the first chapter does nto justify your distaste towards the story. None of the reviews are fake, they are all people who have read the story and gave their honest review. I am aware of grammar mistakes, but keep in mind my writing style is described like that so it doesn’t over complicate readers and makes it easier to read. I however do appreciate the honesty you put into this review and I am looking for improvements as every author needs it. My writing skills was horrible compared to now, so keep in mind that I am also trying. And the synopsis is a run through, the story starts 5 years into it. So I decided to describe it like that. The demis are an unexplainable concept in this world in which will further be discovered as the series continues. And I never put blame on Japan, read as it describes. In the story most people have no clue it began in Japan, Demis are being blamed by the Hunters in which will become frequent enemies in the future. I decided to stay with Cody and Aya (originally supposed to be Oliver and Kayla), I know Aya is short for another name but its the name I preferred for this character. I relate to Cody and Aya more than Oliver and Kayla, hence why I stuck with the character names. The world building isn’t as necessary due to the apocalypse but I do plan on improving in that specific area. ( And non the less why do you spill out an insult by calling me a weeb for naming a character Aya? That by no means makes me a weeb. That was unnecessary, insult to injury ow lmao. And I don’t use grammarly due to being broke and it won’t correct everything last time I used it. (I even used it for chapter 1 and you are writing one whole review for that specific one)
I think its extremely sad to write such a long review on a well made book. Have you seen the massive amount of chapters in this??? The author is also in college whilst writing books, its a whole lot to juggle. If you want to write a distasteful review because you don’t like the complexity of the writing because it describes the scene??? Like seriously its a way to make people visualize the setting and where this has been taking place. You are also critiquing the names that were in the book, saying that they are from two different religions or whatever you said. You do realize anyone can name a child any name because its just a name. Also your saying all this after just reading like the first chapter? Like if you want to read the whole book and then go ahead and write a review, go ahead be my guest. But writing a review after reading the first chapter is just stupid. Also the fact that it was from space and he stated that the japanese went to space for it and you said “why dont say…” but its not your book? So if you just wanna go and write your own boom go ahead but it’ll look like a five year old wrote it because clearly you don’t know good writing. Also if he just said it was from space then there is no context at all. Overall your review is just stupid and makes no sense, you clearly don’t know good writing.
descriptive writing is a good thing, but they're just listing details. no senses or emotions in the scene besides sight. I definitely know good writing, and when there is a grammatical error every sentence, that ain't it.
Synnurs:I think its extremely sad to write such a long review on a well made book. Have you seen the massive amount of chapters in this??? The author is also in college whilst writing books, its a whole lot to juggle. If you want to write a distasteful review because you don’t like the complexity of the writing because it describes the scene??? Like seriously its a way to make people visualize the setting and where this has been taking place. You are also critiquing the names that were in the book, saying that they are from two different religions or whatever you said. You do realize anyone can name a child any name because its just a name. Also your saying all this after just reading like the first chapter? Like if you want to read the whole book and then go ahead and write a review, go ahead be my guest. But writing a review after reading the first chapter is just stupid. Also the fact that it was from space and he stated that the japanese went to space for it and you said “why dont say…” but its not your book? So if you just wanna go and write your own boom go ahead but it’ll look like a five year old wrote it because clearly you don’t know good writing. Also if he just said it was from space then there is no context at all. Overall your review is just stupid and makes no sense, you clearly don’t know good writing.
I reviewed badly because I sat through 3p chapters of confusing nonsense. too many characters in multiple scenes, the settings are described in a way that I can't really imagine them well (lists off attributes), and leaving a review on my book out of spite is funny. I'll let the numbers speak for themselves.
Synnurs:I think its extremely sad to write such a long review on a well made book. Have you seen the massive amount of chapters in this??? The author is also in college whilst writing books, its a whole lot to juggle. If you want to write a distasteful review because you don’t like the complexity of the writing because it describes the scene??? Like seriously its a way to make people visualize the setting and where this has been taking place. You are also critiquing the names that were in the book, saying that they are from two different religions or whatever you said. You do realize anyone can name a child any name because its just a name. Also your saying all this after just reading like the first chapter? Like if you want to read the whole book and then go ahead and write a review, go ahead be my guest. But writing a review after reading the first chapter is just stupid. Also the fact that it was from space and he stated that the japanese went to space for it and you said “why dont say…” but its not your book? So if you just wanna go and write your own boom go ahead but it’ll look like a five year old wrote it because clearly you don’t know good writing. Also if he just said it was from space then there is no context at all. Overall your review is just stupid and makes no sense, you clearly don’t know good writing.