Review Detail of Xristos_Karaxalios in Disaster Bringer

Your story is amazing, I have seen a similar anime and so I can imagine it better, but I am convinced that everything happens very quickly. I do not say it is Oria, but if you made more episodic paradox thanks: the battle, the training and the taxidi would be more Oria Novela. Build the world and "irrigate" it with various details, persuading when an epic battle is being fought, try to describe the battle as if you are there and you see it as a third man or even describe some semias of the battle. At the same time, very good work came together and take my advice if you want. Whatever you do is fantastic and well done again.