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GaureeeyLv13yr
2021-08-12 01:01

on chapter 14 now, ADDED TO LIBRARY! one of the only three books on web novel that I think would succeed IRL if printed into paperbacks, not gonna lie, the prologue is captivating and also creates such a mysterious undertone, its interesting from the beginning, also love the way you introduce characters, Luci's one of my favourite characters so far, its a book that's quite unpredictable, however, I think the cover could be more powerful as it does no justice to how rich the plot is, thank god it's not wordier because its an easy read for English learners too, I'm thrilled to learn more from you and also look forward to what is in store for Irina moving forth, KUDOS AUTHOR,

ARK The Bane of Spectres

Omnitheus
5.0
20 Chs

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Omnitheus
OmnitheusAuthor

Thank you so much for this detailed review. I drew the cover myself and it's the fifth I got. Perhaps when I get more more creative, I can make something that resonates it better. 😊

3yr
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_Meggie_
_Meggie_Lv1

I don't know what to say! this book is REALLY GOOD! I wasn't sure if I was going to like it when I just saw the name, but immediately after the first chapter you get hooked! The writing is really well done and the characters and setting are very well developed. I didn't get to read as much as I wanted to tonight. But I will definitely be back to read more as soon as I can! Keep it up author!

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Omnitheus
OmnitheusAuthor

Author here, guys. I've finally reached half of volume 1. If you've made it this far in the story, let me tell you now that YOU, deserve a five star. Here's what to expect" Writing Quality is almost as impeccable as it could be. The rhetoric and the writing style are harmonious that eliminate monotone. Non-repetitive style and word choice. Updates are good. I mean, writing this on the side, what's better than a daily update, right? Story Development has good pacing. A lot of mysterious major plots with subtle foreshadowing. How they interconnect will surely surprise you and waiting to unravel the mystery can never be more entertaining with action, magic, dark myths, and a teensy bitsy of romance. Character Design is unique on each character. A lot of named characters that are pivotal in the story. Even those that are mentioned but yet to make an appearance is guaranteed to hook you. World Background is an urban dark fantasy. Different realms here and there, but they way they are introduced and the science behind each magic are what make this series full of logic and reason that stood out with the usual fantasy and magic genre. The variety of good and interesting characters will surely make you follow them in each chapter, paragraph, and sentence. Happy reading! Regards, Omnitheus.

3yr
Omnitheus
OmnitheusAuthor

Self review. The most challenging part of writing this is how to introduce a character, his or her origin or culture, and his or her abilities. LOL!

3yr
Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4

A very mysterious and interesting novel. Filled with a lot of actions on top. Great writing, interesting plot, stable story development. Everything is great about this work. I would recommend everyone to read this book at least once, you won't regret it.

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empressblackrose09
empressblackrose09Lv4

This is my second review of this wonderful novel! 😊😊 I got carried away and I totally forgot to review this once again, sorry! 😅 I got a whole picture of this novel and for me, it's like an alternate reality where paranormal exist in this world. Those creatures are what it called "Nightmares" and the ARK is an organization that eliminates or what they called like 'purging' those people who have been manifested by those Nightmare (or am I right for interpreting like that 😅) The fighting scenes are really awesome and you can imagine how they fight by just reading it or how they wield their own weapons. ALL IN ALL! I LOVE THIS NOVEL! 😍😍😍😍 P.S. Your new book cover is really awesome! Can I comission a book cover to you? Hehe! 😁

3yr
Omnitheus
OmnitheusAuthor

Author here, guys. This is posted August 18, 2021. Due to an infringement dispute that I have with a particular seller in Amazon who tries to monetize my work by printing hard opies, I'm slowing my releasing of chapters to twice a week on weekends so this pirate can no longer steal my work as we resolve this. Thank you for your support.

3yr
Lester_Bambico
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interesting plot as early as chapter one, you can feel the author's passion to tell this story will update as i finish reading [img=update]

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DesJean_Valdez_6908
DesJean_Valdez_6908Lv1

That was really good. I really liked how the story was made. Kudos to the writer. I hope they get to make more books like this. Very well appreciated. 👍😊

3yr
Michael_Scofield_3948
Michael_Scofield_3948Lv1

Simple but yet interesting novel packed with different styles of creativity which is vividly expressed by the exquisite choice of words and fascinating story telling. With regards to the characters, a the female protagonist is now new in this kind of genre, but the author makes it unique and non-mainstream look a like. All in all, this was a good one! Looking forward for more. PS: To the author, if there is any chance that this novel will be published physically, kindly give me a copy with your signature on it. Ciao!

3yr
Michelle_Angeles_5812
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Wow! I can't find the exact words to describe how I am fascinated with this creation. The author sounds so professional in telling stories from the deepest sources of his imagination. Reading novel is fun, but this one is absolutely "out of the box" from characters, settings, and story. I wish more writers could be inspired with this one. Continue doing what you love and the fruit of it will prosper in time. I wish I could meet the author personally. #Fangirl

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