Review Detail of yohananmikhael in I have new mission every day

I think there is still improvement especially in description of the surroundings, plot, character design and he writing quality. I was bothered by the dialogues that seems to be identical. Character dialogues and the System dialogues should be easily recognized. Is what I think. And the feelings and emotion is lacking. Even if it's in third's perspective, I can't imagine what is the face that the mc is making and what is the sorroundings. That's all! I wish you a good day.