Review Detail of PriestessLenora in A Sudden Life In A New World

Item: A Sudden Life In A New World
Rating: 5

Review detail

PriestessLenoraLv12yrPriestessLenora

Okay okay! Nice novel if I may say. The start is good, overall the first 3 chapters are amazing. The only problem is that why do you have so many words in your chapter? I think each of your chapter has 4k+ words. If you break those down, you could've already have 7 or more chapters. I expect good expectations from you, Good luck Author in your journey. ;))

A Sudden Life In A New World

Rinal_Cruz

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Rinal_CruzAuthorRinal_Cruz

thanks for the review... :) i'll try to break down some of the chapter in the next one. again, thanks for the review...

2yr

asmosamLv5asmosam

If you change the cover of the novel to attract followers The novel is great, but the picture and the name do not attract attention

Rinal_Cruz:thanks for the review... :) i'll try to break down some of the chapter in the next one. again, thanks for the review...

2yr

Arshen01Lv2Arshen01

tbh I hate the first chapter he got the guys memory and lost it again, the first thing that came to his mind is suicide

2yr