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_BLACKLv42yr
2022-07-14 02:13

it good novel but it's not what I like to read 1- mc is weak mentally 2- I hate when I girl feel like superior than mc like miss tristy it's like she is controlling him 3- the way mc is hated by all people it would have been good to make mc cold 4- mc played the game alot but he doesn't look like he take advantage of that alot like knowing girls personality and stuff but I give this novel 5 star because it good like trust me it's only because I like more mc that are cold and don't get outsmarted by girls

A Sudden Life In A New World

Rinal_Cruz
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204 Chs

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_BLACK
_BLACKLv4

hey I read only 3 chapters so don't take it seriously to much

2yr
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PriestessLenora
PriestessLenoraLv1

Okay okay! Nice novel if I may say. The start is good, overall the first 3 chapters are amazing. The only problem is that why do you have so many words in your chapter? I think each of your chapter has 4k+ words. If you break those down, you could've already have 7 or more chapters. I expect good expectations from you, Good luck Author in your journey. ;))

3yr

haroonarfan109
haroonarfan109Lv1

The story plot is messy so far with very little description and lots of time skips which could be skilfully used and this story could be much better. The start was okay but the pace of events is very fast or extremely slow. Still the story has its own unique point of view even in this clitche type story.

3yr
Fraisier
FraisierLv6

Character development is null.. Mc is a fool and everyone else is crazy, really bad characters. Better thing to do is to not waste your time reading this novel

3yr
DaoistjUIpf3
DaoistjUIpf3Lv14

It sucks the whole story is very bad, all the character are clinging on to him but whenever he comes to accept them, they bark at him as a fool , such idiocy story bye bye forever for this novels. I would give a negative review as a while.

3yr
leorichard2021
leorichard2021Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3yr
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