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Yvette_Celia
Yvette_CeliaLv103yr
2021-06-26 15:56

Hi, I like your story. I can feel every character and you make me feel I'm in your story. I enjoy reading it and give you 5 stars. Keep writing author

Before Dawn (TCC)

Roonman
4.8
7 Chs

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Roonman
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Thank you! I appreciate very much. Im glad my wiriting was immersive enough!!!

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The details are just soo perfect in this book! I’m only 4 chapters in and can see how brilliantly imaginative the author is. The effort put in every expressions made by the character to the buildup tention! I feel like there will be some creative arc in the story Soo im looking forward to it author!

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