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SekaiFukuda
SekaiFukudaLv13yr
2021-06-11 09:41

I've only read the first chapter but this is what I can say, the writing quality is great! No invalid grammar and no misspells, the writing style is great and the point of view is clear. The story development is very unexpected which is great for the story. The character design is very clear. I can imagine the character itself. The world background is great too. I knew immediately that the world that the main lead is in a world where magic exists right at the part when the author wrote the magic eagle. That is a very interesting way to introduce what world it is. Keep up the good work, Author-san!!

The Male Lead is Obsessed with Me

Mary Algen Guiang
4.9
170 Chs

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

thank you so much! thank you for rating us with a perfect 5 stars! thank you for the insightful review! and thank you for appreciating the world-building, this latter part is not usually being commended. so it is a joy for me to read that on your comment. I hope you can read further into the book, and maybe fall in love with one of the male leads. 🥰🥰🥰♥♥♥

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AGAIN!!. THE ULTIMATE NARRATING GODDESS STRIKES AGAIN 😂. This work by one of my favorite author is just phenomenal. The story goes in a pace that makes you live through it. It's almost like you can touch and hear what's happening inside. A 100 KUDOS AUTHOR

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I reviewed so many novels but this one hits different!!!! The plot was unique! I really love this story so bad! This book deserved more than just a 5 stars! looking forward for the next chapters, Good job author! I also added it on my library! keep it up!

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I don’t write reviews often but personally I think this book is 11/10 and probably my new one favourite books. I am not that far but great plot it’s fast paced and I personally like that, and I would like you all to know that paris would make a lovely pet don’t ask how but he would. Yknow it’s worth reading so you should read it and show it some love.

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Five star!!! Like the other reviews; I love the narrative way of writing. I think this is the first book that I've read that is written like this. It grabs you from the first pageant makes you wanna keep on reading. Hope you keep up the great work!!

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The_Celestial_King
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Holy Shit, this is the first that I come across this type of writing. I know there are First Person POV, Second Person POV, and third person POV, but never in my all reading experience did I coke across A good Second Person Pov. The novel story is very creative and amazing, where the author live in his own book and even may meet the MC. This book is a unique master piece people definitely need to read it.

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A phenomenal workpiece by the author-San. First time reading a story in 2nd Pov which makes me feel like I'm the MC in the story. The development of the characters is perfect. Love triangle is always fun to read though it breaks the heart of one person in this. Do check this story and I believe that it won't disappoint you❤️💜 Keep up author with the good work. Saranghae💜

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I am OBSESSED. Words cannot express how OBSESSED I am about this book. the dynamics, the storyline the character development. one thing I love, is the fact that there's more exposure into the minds of each character rather that focussing on making endless conversations.. I can't picture myself in Maru's shoes, I'd cry of frustration everyday. 10/10 recommend this book. the author has done a remarkable job on this story and I seriously can't wait for more chapters.

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Another great book from the Author and this book was unique more than I imagined! It's not a 1st Person POV, not 2nd person POV nor 3rd person POV but READERS POV! The author is really good in narrating the story and with the writing style that the author choose on writing this book, this story is really pulling the readers inside this world as readers gets immersed deeper in the story. Good job Author! This is a another masterpiece from you!

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