Review Detail of Cloudthief in The Cheat Seed

I just started reading and I got through five chapters in total. the book has a really interesting concept and hooks the reader with its prelude chapter of the bout between the two high-ranked Revokers. It's really left an awesome impression on me. The only problem I have with this novel is its diction and emotional expression is a bit lacking, and the writing is a bit simplistic and muddled at times. Though I'm not so concerned with this because the author is aware of his shortcoming and has stated in the footnote of his novel that he'll eventually improve, which I'm really looking forward to! That aside, the book can truly be something spectacular and it's really interesting. The world-background is great, updates stables, and the character design awesome - even though it can a bit more detailed at times. I'm really looking forward to continue reading and seeing the author improve and how the story will eventually unfold!