the novel is good to read and still has lots of potential please don't drop it and specially when it hasn't even reach the best parts on DBZ and DBS also the movies ones too, he just reach SSG so don't drop it

good story so far some mistakes in some sentences and misspelled words could use some editing and proofreading (*just saying no need to take it seriously*) but overall a good dbff to read.

Хороший фанфик. Жалко что там мало фанфиков по Драконьему жемчугу, особенно хороший. Продолжай писать, тебя читают даже через гугл перевод.)👍

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I don't really know how to put it into words but I really love this fic, it deserves to be on top, the best Dragon Ball fic out of all of them, most of them tend to be dimension jumping and it gets old real fast, this is a marvelous fic, it really saddens me to see that this fic hasn't been updated for more than 2 months now, author if your reading this, I hope you will return to this wonderful story, I can't wait to see what will happen next and see the evolution of Turles and best everyone by becoming a super saiyan God first, that would be awesome to see!