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EL_gourdo
EL_gourdoLv13yr
2021-06-10 10:21

I Cant really give a full review yet because there is only one chapter but from what I have seen so far is promising. It has a pretty intresting story and good art.

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DoubleCoN
DoubleCoNLv15

Ill give it a shot im a big supporter of new authors

Dazzling_Verdict
Dazzling_VerdictLv2

why?

DoubleCoN:Ill give it a shot im a big supporter of new authors
DoubleCoN
DoubleCoNLv15

because I like good stories and supporting new authors allows them to get to a point in which they have lots of supporters because what they write is interesting and they no longer need my support so i can move to the next author to support its a good cycle that allows people to grow to a point whwre they can support themselves because what the deliver to us is of good quality something along those lines

Dazzling_Verdict:why?
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jinxin
jinxinLv14

I’ve wasted some fp to see if the MC is redeemable but was left utterly disappointed. It’s the art was good but the rest was not. Plot was the usual cliché that can be find anywhere. Mc was a complete disappointment. I understand if he was severely lacking at first. That’s what character developments are for. I get he was emotional and hot blooded. Loyal? A good person? Thinks of his family? OKAY. That’s alright. But what’s with his moronic decisions one after the other? He keeps on saying I’ll kill them all when he was agitated but killing next to none. His enemies always gets away scot-free with their “devious” scheming which I find baffling because of how simple and obvious those so-called ”schemes” were. Anyone with a brain could have think of it. Let’s say it was because the mc was the type that was easily gets agitated and blinded of reasons because of it. But what about after? There was no excuse for the mc’s stupidity. There’s no real character development. There’s nothing unique to the plot nor the mc. He was STUPID BEYOND REDEMPTION, became cowardly, helpless and powerless without the PLOT ARMOR. Plot armor always saves his pathetic self. Thus, my review would be… Art was passable . As long as it’s good enough I won’t rate it badly. Maybe around the middle 3 out of 5. I’ve seen better works. That’s why. Story development: there’s no great progress. Simple story telling that heavily relied on “mc halo” and plot armor. How to rate? 1? This is assuming 1 is the lowest possible rating. Character development: where’s the character development? I‘ve read it and looked it up even just to see if there’s a tiny hope of it existing somewhere, but NOPE! So… 1 again? In conclusion, the art was its saving grace. After thought: Reading so far in it left a bad taste and made one fully frustrated. I regretted reading it to pass the time. So I couldn’t really recommend it. But if you have a tough heart that can withstand stupid characters that left you always frustrated and just wanted to see the art then maybe this is for… you? Anyways, it’s not it for me. 🤦🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️😅