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2021-06-16 20:19

Interesting storyline and unique plot, you can display a lot of character development in the novel, writing needs to be improved otherwise interesting novel, hope to see interesting updates in future

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Thanks~ 💕😊🙂 I'll do my best to improve, and be better. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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