Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The Big in Little

I understand how hard it was for none english speakers to write in this language, but still the author was exemplary and outstanding in the narration aspect. Making me to be left on the dust despite all my practice in two years already. What a good day to have read your novel. Though I suggest to trim some errors and typos for better quality. The story potential was there but still two chaps can't let me see the overall impression. Just seeing the tip of the iceberg here but so far from what I've read. It was cut above the rest. Good luck in the contest and may you improve more in the future.