Review Detail of Artur9jgtf in Rebirth Of The Strongest Celestial

Item: Rebirth Of The Strongest Celestial
Rating: 3.8

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Artur9jgtfLv142yrArtur9jgtf

My main complaint is the writing quality… sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s happening in the story… the author should find someone to edit his chapters as soon as possible… other than that it might be good… though the mc seems a little naive for someone with future knowledge.

Rebirth Of The Strongest Celestial

Lonely_Author

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Lonely_AuthorAuthorLonely_Author

He has memories and thats faible. Plus there is overwatch she dead a fool...and I hope to start have naive and trusting so that he can find out what people are really like and see what that does to him.....thank you hopefully my writing will get better

2yr

Rela_XLv11Rela_X

true, just looking at the author’s comment I can see that he’s either brain damaged or just stupid

2yr

ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

Is this a harem or just one fml?

Lonely_Author:He has memories and thats faible. Plus there is overwatch she dead a fool...and I hope to start have naive and trusting so that he can find out what people are really like and see what that does to him.....thank you hopefully my writing will get better

2yr

Lonely_AuthorAuthorLonely_Author

depends on the character I can say a harem does exist. Tyr is a focusing lense he shares the stage with many characters.

2yr

ChaosAsura0Lv1ChaosAsura0

I’m talking about the mc will he have a harem or just a 1 fml

Lonely_Author:depends on the character I can say a harem does exist. Tyr is a focusing lense he shares the stage with many characters.

2yr