Review Detail of Mehmehmeh in Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece

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MehmehmehLv152yrMehmehmeh

This story bland and boring The MC is a arrogant young master beta male virgin character type, those should never be mixed together let alone be a MC. .........i could probably type a lot more but these are the major problems with this book and i don’t want to waste anymore time on this, it’s just not worth it.

Madara Uchiha With The Omniverse System First World: One Piece

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KIMPOtripinLv3KIMPOtripin

I mean at first it was good but then the story just turned into pokemon

2yr

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Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

That's some weird paradox, comrade. That's shouldn't exist.

2yr

MaulannLv4Maulann

Like u can make an interesting story? I bet you are just some fckng nerd who shut down himself in his own cave. Thats make ur life boring

2yr

MehmehmehLv15Mehmehmeh

Yep living the dream, there is more room in the cave if you want to join too.😏

Maulann:Like u can make an interesting story? I bet you are just some fckng nerd who shut down himself in his own cave. Thats make ur life boring

2yr

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