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Wargram
WargramLv53yr
2021-07-12 23:00

Read tons of Naruto novel and yeee this 1 is good Of course there is shortcomings Sadly MC got strong way to fast(or should i say overpowered) You could build on how he got strong (show us how he struggle for power so readers care more and be more immersive) And show others people perspective on how they see MC Overall good novel TY

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